"What is LOVE??? "

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is it a feeling
or a self-killing??
a river of emotions
or just fake devotions??

a sweet we never knew
or a rotten bread to chew??
you steps into it
or a tide pulling bit by bit???

is it a freedom
or a purgatory kingdom???
it takes away your tension
or give the same as pension???

is it june in december
or a puzzle to decipher??
an eagle or a dove
can you tell me "what is love"???

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WarmSunshine said…
"is it june in december
or a puzzle to decipher??
an eagle or a dove
can you tell me "what is love"???"

... can something as big as love be summed up in one definition? It's a hard try I guess!

All your poems I have read until now have innocent rhyming.

This was sweet

:)
November 18, 2008 at 12:29 PM
Unknown said…
is it june in december
or a puzzle to decipher??
an eagle or a dove
can you tell me "what is love"???




wOw....amazing lines???

tune likhhha hai???
simply outstanding...
November 21, 2008 at 12:52 AM
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